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I Will Forever Be by =AlexiaStorm:iconAlexiaStorm:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


I will forever be,
Hungry, for I can never have that which will
satisfy my appetite.
Cold, for I can never have the fire of a new
life in me. To feel it growing stronger.
Barren and empty, for I can never hold that
which is a part of me, to know that a part of
me will continue on when my time is up.
Lonely, for I may have my loved ones, my
family and my friends, but I will never have
the one thing I truely want in this world...

A child of my own. To feel it inside me, to
feel it kick for the first time. To give birth
to a new life.
A child that my parents could cherrish, I
could love, and my friends could adore.


Copyright ©2006 Michelle Alexia "Jade" Storm
©2006-2009 =AlexiaStorm
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Author's Comments

To all those that are missing something in there life.

This poem was written when I was really depressed.
My life is much better now, and I figured I'd put this poem up for others to read.

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=KuroHaneTenshiN Jan 24, 2006, 2:06:43 PM
Nice job with the poem and knowing you helps me understand more of what you mean by what you typed. Don't show Sirus in the chat...hates free verse.

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~sirus-sama Jan 30, 2006, 8:34:53 AM
as kei said i am not really a big fan of free verse. however, silvia changed that enough. regardless of my feelings on the style i find your poem very good. that's because, i can feel the emotion in it. knowing you does help someone understand your meaning behind it. however, interpretation was left in it and that's another aspect that makes it good. keep it up.
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~brutus87 Feb 7, 2006, 7:56:26 PM
tis very nicely done....and very moving. i've read this before, just hadnt gotten around to posting ^^;

anways, knowing you and what your going thru, this makes a lot of sense. like i said, its done well, and, it is moving, but i think moreso because i know you. if i didnt, im not quite sure id get the whole meaning behind it.

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JLP: it's not art unless it offends someone
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~NinjaPrincessMermaid May 15, 2009, 6:29:33 AM
/sniff

Beautiful.

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Mood: Euphoric =AlexiaStorm May 15, 2009, 6:33:25 AM
Thanks... I will see if I can locate my "sort of a diary" I might have a few more poems I'm willing to share....

--
Jade
Dragon Impersonating a human and failing.
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